Deena Larsen on Her Electronic Master's Thesis

To give you an idea of the atmosphere surrounding hypertexts just a few years ago, let me briefly explain what happened with my master's thesis. I started my thesis in 1990. Afternoon had been out for 3 years, the article in Writing on the Edge was just out, and hypertext was a very foreign and bizarre concept. While this was (as far as I can tell) the first Master's thesis on hypertextual structures not possible in a linear format, it really started out as a sneaky excuse to use the University of Colorado's equipment to write out and plan Marble Springs.

I carefully chose my advisors as folks who wouldn't mind going along with a bit of an outlandish idea--write about the inherent possibilities of a medium that hasn't really been developed yet and use my work to demonstrate some of these ideas. I read what was available (Writing Space was particularly intriguing) and interviewed people for ideas and perspectives. Mark Bernstein, Micheal Joyce, and William Dickey helped me out tremendously.

Since no one really knew what I was doing, I had free rein, which was nice. My thesis advisors had not really been around computers (I had to teach one of them how to use a mouse) and had no idea that writing on the screen could be any different than writing with pen and ink. So while I would have far rather spent my thesis defense explaining what people had done and how you could do so much more, I actually spent most of it explaining why clicking, animation, and navigation were different from turning a page.

My thesis advisors got the concepts only after they were demonstrated on the computer, so I thought, ok, I'll write the whole thing as a hypertext. That way, I could get the concepts across and still write about what interested me. I wrote the dissertation in HyperCard and pasted in screens and animation from William Dickey's poems to show how movement and navigation became an integral part of the poetic structure.

This worked out great until I hit the brick wall known as the Graduate School Committee. These gentlemen refused to accept any part of my thesis whatsoever that was not written on paper. I asked why. They replied that the library could not store, catalogue, or lend disks. So I donated several hypertexts to the library, got a friend of mine in cataloging to fix up a system to loan them out, and went back to the committee. They acknowledged that the library could indeed handle disks and could therefore accept a thesis on a disk. I got a pat on the back and was told to come back tomorrow.

When I went back, they refused to accept my thesis on a disk. I asked why. They said that it did not meet the format requirements, which had not been broken in the last century. I asked for specifics. They said, well it doesn't have one inch margins. I carefully held out a disk, measured it and said, look, if I use one inch margins then I won't have any space at all to write. They looked at this and it actually took them about three minutes to realize that you don't write your thesis on the outside of a disk. So they said, you idiot, you have to have paper to have one inch margins.

I sat and very patiently explained that you couldn't explain this on paper. (Really, I knelt because the three gentlemen had the comfy chairs and I had to pull out lots of pieces of paper and say see, this goes here, but it also goes here, and . . .) They said, look, you just spent a half an hour on a linear discussion of this stuff. Just put that down on paper, call it a somewhat large intro and we'll take the disk with your hypertext. No one will want to see the disk of your work, mind you. We will just judge this on the quality of the paper introduction.

So then I got the bright idea of doing a paper hypertext. Worked out a pretty good system of connective links for paper. Barely got it approved from my advisors, who said that I had lost a lot of the hypertextual ideas and that they understood the possible structures and connections much better when they were in front of the computer. Got hauled back in front of the brick wall. Again they refused the disks. Turns out this time I didn't have sequential page numbers. We went through the whole thing again. I held my hand against my mouth to refrain from explaining a few things to these gentlemen.

By this time, it was July 1992 and I had a job lined up if I could only get that degree in hand by August. So I compromised my ideals and turned from fighting windmills to grabbing a piece of sheepskin. I handed in a pretty straightforward, linear, paper introduction to hypertextual poetry and potential structures as the first part of my thesis and a very rough first draft of Marble Springs on a MacIntosh disk as the second part of my thesis. I also made a paper cover for the disk and drew very careful one inch margins around the cover.

This time, they grudgingly accepted the disk. I asked them if they wanted back ups. They said, no, one disk was plenty, thank you. About six months later, my paper thesis showed up on the shelves. The disk was no where to be found. An unfortunate oversight, I'm sure. So I handed my friend in cataloguing another disk, and we finally got it into the system.

I went over to the library about a year ago: they still have the paper part of the thesis but someone took the disk out of the library. My friend no longer works in cataloguing and the current crowd doesn't want me to replace it (thank you, no, we'll pass on the free live alligators was pretty much how they phrased it).

Deena Larsen