Samuel Taylor Coleridge
The Rime of the Ancient Mariner
IN SEVEN PARTS
[first version]
Only the major differences from the finished version are included here,
that is, stanzas that were omitted or greatly changed from the
later editions. There was also much more use of archaic words in
the first edition and less assured use of rhythm.
The
complete first (1798) edition.
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from PART III
- And those her naked ribs, which fleck'd
- The sun that did behind them peer?
- And are these two all, all the crew?
- That woman and her fleshless Pheere?
- His bones were black with many a crack,
- All black and bare, I ween;
- Jet-black and bare, save where with rust
Of mouldy damps and charnel crust
- They're patch'd with purple and green.
- Her lips are red, her looks are free,
- Her locks are yellow as gold:
- Her skin is as white as leprosy,
And she is far liker Death than he;
- Her flesh makes the still air cold.
- The naked Hulk alongside came
- And the Twain were playing dice;
- `The Game is done! I've won, I've won!'
- Quoth she, and whistled thrice.
- A gust of wind sterte up behind
- And whistled thro' his bones;
- Thro' the holes of his eyes and the hole of his mouth
- Half-whistles and half-groans.
- With never a whisper in the Sea
- Off darts the Spectre-ship;
- While clombe above the Eastern bar
The horned Moon, with one bright Star
- Almost atween the tips.
- One after one by the horned Moon
- (Listen, O Stranger! to me)
- Each turn'd his face with a ghastly pang
- And curs'd me with his ee.
- Four times fifty living men,
- With never a sigh or groan,
- With heavy thump, a lifeless lump
- They dropp'd down one by one.
- There souls did from their bodies fly,--
- They fled to bliss or woe;
- And every soul it pass'd me by,
- Like the whiz of my Cross-bow.
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from PART V
Listen, O listen, thou Wedding-guest!
- `Marinere! thou hast thy will:
- `For that, which comes out of thine eye, doth make
- `My body and soul to be still.'
- Never sadder tale was told
- To a man of woman born:
- Sadder and wiser thou wedding-guest!
- Thou'lt rise to-morrow morn.
- Never sadder tale was heard
- By a man of woman born:
- The Marineres all return'd to work
- As silent as beforne.
- The Marineres all 'gan pull the ropes
- But look at me they n'old:
- Thought I, I am as thin as air--
- They cannot me behold.
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from PART VI
The moonlight bay was white all o'er,
- Till rising from the same,
- Full many shapes, that shadows were,
- Like as of torches came.
- A little distance from the prow
- Those dark-red shadows were;
- But soon I saw that my own flesh
- Was red as in a glare.
- I turn'd my head in fear and dread,
- And by the holy rood,
- The bodies had advanc'd, and now
- Before the mast they stood.
- They lifted up their stiff right arms,
- They held them strait and tight;
- And each right-arm burnt like a torch,
- A torch that's borne upright.
- Their stony eye-balls glitter'd on
- In the red and smoky light.
- I pray'd and turn'd my head away
- Forth looking as before.
- There was no breeze upon the bay,
- No wave against the shore.
...
- Then vanish'd all the lovely lights;
- The bodies rose anew:
- With silent pace, each to his place
- Came back the ghastly crew.
- The wind, that shade nor motion made,
- On me alone it blew.
1797-1798, from the
version published in
1798, final version
mostly dates from
1817.
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